Wednesday, 8 June 2016

The legend of the moon - Written by Joseph

9000 years ago there was no moon. There were 7 sisters that never got on. The sisters were given a diamond necklace BUT they wouldn't share. Libby wanted to wear it to the ball. Her sisters ripped off her necklace roughly. The beads went up into space and turned into stars. The 7 sisters were so angry. Cam the God of Kindness said, "If you can't share, nobody can have it!" He tossed the diamond into the sky and it became the moon.

I am so proud of my writing because I spent a lot of time doing this.

1 comment:

  1. I am proud of you too! Look what you can achieve when you try!

    This is a creative narrative about how we got the moon. I like how it has a message too.